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Default 07-12-2008, 01:51 AM

This is only a minor detail, but the text on the main page ("You're currently...") seems pretty awkward in terms of how each line ends. It might look better to make that in block format or to put a space in between certain sections of text.

Also, within that same text there are some words that seem to be randomly capitalized.

I teach English, so that's probably why it bugs me.

The color scheme and logo at the top is pretty cool, though.


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