My Roadside Assistance Website!


#1

I have created a website for people in need of roadside assistance such as unlimited towing and several other benefits. Is this design good or should I consider another design? Thanks in advance my friends, here is my website:

-> [U]Motor Club of America[/U] <-


#2

Not bad man.
I think you should consider to change the font type first, because I feel a bit messy with that font, it don’t fit well with your design


#3

Great job here. Did you use a template for this?


#4

Looks very professional…


#5

Thanks for the kind remarks everyone, I’m still considering buying a whole new them to be updated on what is new! @rhodesv I used the free Wordpress template. I’ve edited the main index though.


#6

Looks OK. Nothing flashy, but it basically works. BUT… you need a professional editor badly. There are so many grammar mistakes it is nearly impossible to read through. Small example: In the second or third sentence of the “About MCA” section you have a sentence beginning "We have a ever growing list… " I hope you notice that you wrote “…a ever…” instead of what should be …an ever… This is a simple mistake, but poor grammar, awkward sentence structure, run-on sentences and over wrought wordyness are rampant. I’m guessing you are not a native “American” English speaker, which is fine, but you should spend a few bucks and get a professional editor to go over your text so it reads like it was written for an old, established business based in Oklahoma, not possibly by a scam site set up in Nigeria or Bangalore, or wherever. Now, if the whole MCA company is just a made up business that you created for the sake of building a website, then I suppose it doesn’t matter much.

I am offering this feedback in a positive, though critical manner so you can improve on an important aspect of website development - getting your message understood. A web developer need not be a writer or a marketer or anything else. Just know what you are good at and where your limits are and work with others who compliment your skills and fill in the gaps. Hope this helps.


#7

This website is NOT hosted by 000webhost. It’s hosted by Bluehost. They apparently just posted here because to drive traffic to their site. That makes this SPAM, which doesn’t surprise me because Motor Club of America is an MLM scam, and the only way anyone ever makes money on MLM scams is to spam everywhere and hope to sucker enough people into it.


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#9

Really nice looking site bro. Good luck for the future of it. Keep working.


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